Look at the writing stimulus. Write a paragraph response to the stimulus.
Your response may take the form of:
- A descriptive piece
- A story starter
- A poem
- A recount
Your response must:
- Be 5 to 6 sentences in length (no shorter, no longer)
- Use correct grammar and punctuation
- Self-edit your work before publishing to check the above
- Be published on the class blog before Thursday
In the tiny world, with tiny people, one man, will write the biggest story EVER. Coming your way this summer, one man will write the BIGGEST book ever…but what about the risk, is he going to do it, spine tingling action one man will achieve the impossible.
THE BOOK
coming in cinemas 15th november
1999-2000
Ever since May the 1st 1999 I’ve been trying to write on this piece of paper, but I still cannot reach it. It is now the 1st of May 2000 and I am still about seven metres from my double sided pencil reaching the half decent piece of paper. I started looking arond the room that I was in. It was as dark as midnight.Then I felt something sharp poking into my trousers. Finally a glimpse of sunlight shone through the window and I saw what was poking into my trousers. It was the sharp end of my pencil. I took it out and then I finally had the strength to pull my pencil down onto the piece of paper. I felt so relieved that I had completed my mission, but I am never doing that again. 🙂 🙁
Today I’m going to tell you a story about how my wish came true! One gloomy afternoon I layed down on my warm cosy bed wishing that my spectacular drawings would come to life! I hope I was not asking for the impossible, right? Anyway, this wasn’t the first time I wished for this unimaginable thing to happen. You see at times I feel lonely and all I really want is a friend. Later that night something magical happened. My magnificent drawings started rising up out of the paper “we’re free” they all cried. The night was getting warmer so Mum left the window opened. In the morning I spotted large holes from where my drawings once were! I rushed into the kitchen and saw mum watching T.V, it was on breaking news “hurry, look!” Mum said, it seemed to show that these paper people had come to life.
“They look quite similar to your drawings” “oh no!” I cried. From that day on I learnt something very important, be careful what you wish for. 🙂
As I was leaving the classroom looking at all the mess people had left behind lying around, like papers and pencil. I saw a miniature little boy pop out of Jeff’s paper. He was as small as a fly, and he was drawing himself with a large pencil. Then all of a sudden he jumped out of this mysterious paper and said ” hi ” with a rather English accent. I spoke back softly and said ” hello what are you doing ” ? He answered ” I’m checking out this classroom. He picked himself up and started exploring the classroom. But before long he jumped out the window and said got to go explore the city. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
By Lachie
One morning I was writing a story at school.I was writing about how I was really small and I won a doge ball game.The next time I looked at my self after writing that sentence.I was really small my teacher couldn’t even see me because I was so small.Then my teacher started to get worried and rang my mum.I quickly wrote in my story I turned the same size again.Then just before my parents came I became the same height again.
Turning Into Gray Lead
As I was drawing, I felt like I was really small, I checked myself to see if I was okay and I was. Although I had become a miniature my mind was racing, how will I get big again, what if dad swats me like a fly. Or even worse being tortured and be part of his bug collection. As I tried to get up I lifted my body but my legs didn’t move. They were stuck because my lower limbs were on paper with gray lead. Will I be stuck here forever?……..
I was walking down the street and and I saw as bushy as a forest. I am Hawk as I was saying I went I went in the forest and saw a tree-pencil. I hang on the tree-pencil and it flow me up I was called I didn’t have anything to eat or drink. so I fell and I ran out of the forests and went in to my house
THE END
This is a Story Starter. It may look like a Story but it is not. It is a long Story Starter.
Tom was in a car accident. Both of Tom’s legs broke, and he was in a wheel chair. To past the time he drew pictures. After a few weeks he became so good his pictures looked life-like. He still could not accept that he couldn’t walk. One night he dreamed that he had a magic pencil that when you draw with it, the object that you drew becomes real. Then he drew him self new legs.
To Be Continued………
THE LEGLESS MAN
There once was a minute man called Jim. He was very peculiar because he had no legs. One day he decided to draw himself some legs, so he did but when he stood up they came off. He raged with anger. Suddenly a huge, turquoise question mark came out of his head. He thought if he could take in enough radioactivity he might be able to grow some legs. He hopped on his remote control car and sped down the freeway until he came to a nuclear energy factory. He crashed the car into a generator, this caused him to absorb a huge amount of energy and suddenly his legs reappeared.
THE END
It is very large and surprisingly no charge at all. I was very happy never to be unhappy again! It was such a pleasure when my friends said it is such a treasure. I wonder why a book can be so
intriguing when I am only just turning a page. It’s so strange! No!!!!!!!!! I’m going through a book to a land.
The person never saw light again
Bang there I was writing on a piece of paper with an enourmas pencil as big as a dinosaur. I was frightened at once but then I realised I was so small I couldn’t touch the ground without someone picking me up and putting me there. I wondered why I was so small and how I even became small. This is very very strange I thought to myself. None was around me i couldn’t even hear a bee buzzing. Then I had an idea, if I wrote a note to tell someone i’m here they might know where they can find my home. I wrote the note saying ” hi i’m Anabelle and I am lost, i woke up and found myself tiny sitting on this table. Can you help find my home.” There we go thats my note, your probably thinking why I rote a note, well heres why. If i’m tiny I will probably have a squeaky voice and I don’t want to embarrass myself if they can’t hear me so that’s why. All of a sudden I started growing taller and taller, and someone walked to the room so there was no reason to write a note. I asked the person if she could help me and I found myself home in no time.
Jeff was a young boy who had been drawn in his world of paper. One day after he had finished colouring himself in he went traveling in the “Portal of Anywhere” which takes you somewhere random. So as planned he pushed a pencil down the hole punch and slid down it entering the portal. That portal lead him to a mysterious planet, he was frighted and full of fear to speak.
I woke up in excitement that today was going to be a different day than yesterday. I drew imaginative pictures in my diary hoping that they would come true. I looked at my diary and in the corner of my eye I spotted a tiny person that I hadn’t finished drawing.
That mini person was drawing its legs by itself. I couldn’t believe what I saw. It didn’t notice me. I was surprised. Then all of a sudden it stood up and…… My day was surely different.
so my name is Mick and i’m on my creaters bed ready to draw my magical legs so i can be free at last. But my owner left his pencil on his bed so if gust reach to grab it i can draw my legs and get out of here yes i grabbed it so i’m going to draw my legs run free!!.
“Ding, ding, ding” the school bell rang as the children walked inside. It was the third lesson of the day and I was in english class. After Ms Honey handed me a sheet I Looked down to see a small man sitting there writing my name. I was shocked and scared, I didn’t now what to say. Ms Honey approached me. I pointed to my my sheet of paper but it was blank. I must of had a bad night.
“I’ve lost my legs! Oooh, if only I could get that pencil over there. Rex, Rex, here boy, good boy Rex. Fetch the pencil. Thanks for your help. Now I can re-draw my legs – I’M FREE!!!”
🙂
CLONK!! I woke up in shock and looked behind me. I saw a gaint hand come out of the sky and placed what I thought to be an aquariam which turned out to be a glass. I was stunned. I looked up and heard screaching coming from a distance. I was so scard I played dead. Then a gaint picked me up and through me on the ground. I screamed as hard as I could and said “HELP ME!” a giant girl picked me up and
asked “Who are you?” I was so petrafied I did’nt talk. She placed me back on the table and let me be. Then I realised it was just a nightmare.
CLONK!! I woke up in shock and looked behind me. I saw a gaint hand come out of the sky and placed what I thought to be an aquariam which turned out to be a glass. I was stunned. I looked up and heard screaching coming from a distance. I was so scared I played dead. Then a gaint picked me up and through me on the ground. I screamed as hard as I could and said “HELP ME!” a giant girl picked me up and
asked “Who are you?” I was so petrafied I did’nt talk. She placed me back on the table and let me be. Then I realised it was just a nightmare.
I was sketching in my book and I drew a person and began to colour him. All of a sudden his body became real. It was amazing and awesome!!. I really wanted to be good friends with the person, so I named him Liam. He was friendly and nice. I made him a tiny house out of wood, I put a bed,table,couch,chairs,a bath,a tap and a sink ,a toilet and other things. We became very good friends. I drew a girl and coloured her in . A sister for Liam, I named the girl Claire and put her in the same house. It is nice to have great adventures with Liam and Claire. Next time I can add more people.
One mysterious school day, I went back to class after lunch and I drew a picture of someone. I was finished doing his body but not his legs. Then, mythicaly as I touched the pencil, he reached out and grabed my pencil and started to drew his own legs.
I was amazed of what this little person can do and he started to come into life!
I didn’t know what to do to him so I let him be free into the open world…